I presented our
Remake-Remodel tasks to the group and explained the choices I made. Here is
some of the critique I received:
- Part of the wall behind the cover star has not been removed fully.
- Furthermore, some areas are cropped dodgy
- The red font face for “Red Hot Chili Peppers” has been lost in the dark clothing.
- The “Plus” section is too small and could do with a few more cover lines – currently it looks out of place.
- The cover stars are a little too big; they could do with being shrunk just a little bit as they dominate the masthead.
In the future, I will refer
back to this task to help me when creating my real magazine. This task is useful
for learning the software and making mistakes now so I don’t have to make them when
making my real magazine.
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