General
Feedback
As a class, we received some
general feedback, which included some things that I have already done but also
included some things that I have not. The feedback we received was:
- Must establish ideas from Research into Similar Products
- E.g. asking ourselves “where did this idea come from?”
- “New single” never appears on the front cover of a magazine as a cover line.
- Instead, you will find “New album” or “Upcoming tour” – usually both
- Artists lack musical Mise-en-scene.
- E.g. wrong costume, wrong body language, etc.
- Contents pages tend to lack “Substance”
- i.e. low number of pages (e.g. below 100 pages for a monthly magazine)
- too few cover lines in the table of contents
- Front Covers, Contents Pages and Double Page Spreads all need a “holistic” approach
- E.g. using the same cover star on the cover, contents and DPS. Using cover lines on the cover on the table of contents on the Contents Page
- Content for DPS tends to be “Corny” with not enough content.
- i.e. avoid saying things like “My fans are the most important thing to me”
- Font size for DPS must be 8
- Focus on SPaG – marks will be lost for poor spelling, punctuation and grammar.
Personal
Feedback
My teacher and I had a one-to-one
talk about feedback on my magazine, some of the feedback he gave me included:
- The proportions of my masthead to my main cover star are off, masthead needs to be smaller and pushed upwards.
- My skyline needs a lot of work – at the moment it looks too plain.
- My main cover line needs to be more centralised and straight on my cover page.
- My secondary cover lines need improvement. Currently, they are too blocky, could space them out a bit, centre my cover star and put cover lines around my cover star.
- My DPS needs more content – not enough content of my article.
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